Howishine
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I think I hate most people.
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Post by Howishine on Dec 12, 2014 17:49:16 GMT -5
So sour. The tastes of your lips. So sweet, the remnants of your kiss.
Like lemon or lime, or maybe, sugary candy with a hint of honey.
Naked embraces, and withering graces, mask hiding painful faces, with golden blood dripping from our necks.
Such a struggle, so deep desperation, unbeknownst to me and her, nothing was meant to be.
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Post by Ne-on on Dec 12, 2014 17:56:01 GMT -5
Ahhhhh that's beautiful I love romance-themed poetry & your choice of words & imagery is awesome <3 Writing from personal experience?
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Healix
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Post by Healix on Dec 12, 2014 17:56:34 GMT -5
Well done Howi! Nice poem man. It really plucked a memory in me.
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CF
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I love the night
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Post by CF on Dec 12, 2014 18:09:37 GMT -5
So Beautiful
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Seven
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Post by Seven on Dec 12, 2014 19:34:25 GMT -5
I read few of your poems in DA, gee ! your good bro xD Howishine
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Howishine
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I think I hate most people.
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Post by Howishine on Dec 17, 2014 7:24:10 GMT -5
Naww... Not personal experience I guess!
Thanks to everyone who likes this c:
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