Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED]

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Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 10:13:55 GMT -5

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Post by Dataman on Jan 31, 2015 10:13:55 GMT -5

Jan 31, 2015 10:10:09 GMT -5 Ne-on said:

Dataman I like it so far! I'll definitely keep reading this

Does the comedy part work so far? Asking because there's still plenty of time to make it better in case it sucks now.

Thanks for support. ^^

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Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 10:28:44 GMT -5 Dataman likes this

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Post by Ne-on on Jan 31, 2015 10:28:44 GMT -5

Jan 31, 2015 10:13:55 GMT -5 Dataman said:

Jan 31, 2015 10:10:09 GMT -5 Ne-on said:

Dataman I like it so far! I'll definitely keep reading this

Does the comedy part work so far? Asking because there's still plenty of time to make it better in case it sucks now.

Thanks for support. ^^

Yeah, and the girls are cute, too

I don't have any criticism so far!

Kawaii to the death

Gluttony Noob "Can I eat them?!" Posts: 54	Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 14:36:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Gluttony on Jan 31, 2015 14:36:42 GMT -5 The comedy hilarious! I love this, and I look forward to reading the rest of this! Funny how the elephant just plops out of nowhere. XD

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Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 15:14:13 GMT -5 Gluttony likes this

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Post by Dataman on Jan 31, 2015 15:14:13 GMT -5

Jan 31, 2015 14:36:42 GMT -5 Gluttony said:

The comedy hilarious! I love this, and I look forward to reading the rest of this! Funny how the elephant just plops out of nowhere. XD

Thank you.

I had a blast creating that scene, and I have a lot more comedy in the following parts as well, soo look forward! Also, I kinda decided that I'd upload three more one wednesday, so the update schedule would be little tighter.
I'm okay with that because one of my new years' promises was to make at least two complete pages a day. What'd you people reading this think? ^^

Watch my series Anime Sword Techniques in Youtube. ^-^
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Currently on the series: Gatotsu, Santoryu, Yontoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin, Brook's fencing, Mugen Ittoryu, Kogan-ryu, Ittoryu, Champuru-ryu, Claymore-ryu... and more coming!

Gluttony Noob "Can I eat them?!" Posts: 54	Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 15:25:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Gluttony on Jan 31, 2015 15:25:59 GMT -5 Forgot to mention that the name is really charming! Glad to know it's coming Wednesday. I also wanna see the many ways they try to keep the elephant away. Very very well done.

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Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 15:31:22 GMT -5

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Post by Dataman on Jan 31, 2015 15:31:22 GMT -5

Jan 31, 2015 15:25:59 GMT -5 Gluttony said:

Forgot to mention that the name is really charming!

Glad to know it's coming Wednesday. I also wanna see the many ways they try to keep the elephant away. Very very well done.

Alrighty then. ^^ *is happy to get complimented*

There are actually many elephants, not only one. That makes the story conflictful.

Watch my series Anime Sword Techniques in Youtube. ^-^
www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL-CANyUn3fVtcYm2b4q-nKUuLj6Mah4_o
Currently on the series: Gatotsu, Santoryu, Yontoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin, Brook's fencing, Mugen Ittoryu, Kogan-ryu, Ittoryu, Champuru-ryu, Claymore-ryu... and more coming!

Gluttony Noob "Can I eat them?!" Posts: 54	Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 15:40:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Gluttony on Jan 31, 2015 15:40:06 GMT -5 Even better! Spoiler on the next three pages?

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Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 15:42:54 GMT -5

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Post by Dataman on Jan 31, 2015 15:42:54 GMT -5

Jan 31, 2015 15:40:06 GMT -5 Gluttony said:

Even better!

Spoiler on the next three pages?

I think I won't spoil this stuff, because I always hate when I get spoiled about some series I enjoy watching/reading.

Just wait patiently.

Watch my series Anime Sword Techniques in Youtube. ^-^
www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL-CANyUn3fVtcYm2b4q-nKUuLj6Mah4_o
Currently on the series: Gatotsu, Santoryu, Yontoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin, Brook's fencing, Mugen Ittoryu, Kogan-ryu, Ittoryu, Champuru-ryu, Claymore-ryu... and more coming!

Seven Forum Leaders Posts: 719	Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 16:54:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Seven on Jan 31, 2015 16:54:57 GMT -5 Dataman I have a DA premium membership, is there a way to give it to you eventhough I already deactivated my account?
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Dataman Global Moderator Looking for anime sword techniques to analyze&feature in my show. Help is appreciated. ^^ Posts: 681 Credits: 2	Armour Witches, Crops and Elephants [COMPLETED] Jan 31, 2015 23:54:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Dataman on Jan 31, 2015 23:54:15 GMT -5 Jan 31, 2015 16:54:57 GMT -5 Seven said: Dataman I have a DA premium membership, is there a way to give it to you eventhough I already deactivated my account? I don't think so... But you can try if you want to.
	Watch my series Anime Sword Techniques in Youtube. ^-^ www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL-CANyUn3fVtcYm2b4q-nKUuLj6Mah4_o Currently on the series: Gatotsu, Santoryu, Yontoryu, Hiten Mitsurugi, Seven Swords Dance, Wattoujutsu, Scissorblade, Kamiya Kasshin, Brook's fencing, Mugen Ittoryu, Kogan-ryu, Ittoryu, Champuru-ryu, Claymore-ryu... and more coming!