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Post by Dataman on Jul 28, 2015 3:20:51 GMT -5
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Post by Ne-on on Aug 1, 2015 23:45:05 GMT -5
I think this most recent chapter is my favorite so far  Loving the drama between the girls and the side story with the boy who temporarily becomes an armor witch. Looks like things are heating up~ |
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Post by Dataman on Aug 2, 2015 1:12:31 GMT -5
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Post by Dataman on Aug 4, 2015 2:33:09 GMT -5
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Post by Dataman on Aug 8, 2015 2:04:36 GMT -5
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Post by Dataman on Aug 11, 2015 1:09:53 GMT -5
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Post by Ne-on on Oct 4, 2015 1:07:07 GMT -5
The ending with Manju was really sweet! It was nice to see another side to her towards the end of the story, and same with the other girls Love how much detail you put into the cover art in the last few pages! |
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Post by Dataman on Oct 4, 2015 1:33:21 GMT -5
The ending with Manju was really sweet! It was nice to see another side to her towards the end of the story, and same with the other girls Love how much detail you put into the cover art in the last few pages! I was worried that it was too much 180 turn, but it seems I did good. What did you think of the story overall, characters, art and such, and can you answer the poll?  I have already almost made the cover art for the sequel, but it will have to wait, for I right now have a ton of stuff to deal with, school and life and various sicknesses... Anyway, how much hype do you have? I might be able to continue it sooner if it would get a good reception.  |
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Post by Ne-on on Oct 5, 2015 0:15:28 GMT -5
I don't think it was too unexpected...in fact, if anything it might have been a little predictable, but not necessarily in a bad way. Well, Manju is my favorite character as you can probably tell xD The story overall is pretty interesting; if I could give you any advice, it would really be regarding the artwork. Sometimes some drawings appear a little smudged (could just be the way you did the shading), so I would clean that up a little & also work on making neater lines when it comes to objects that are perfectly straight or round, since they're sometimes a little more wavy than they should be. But it really is great overall! I will definitely read the sequel once you start working on that, but since there wasn't much of a cliffhanger, I can be patient |
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Post by Dataman on Oct 5, 2015 3:19:28 GMT -5
I don't think it was too unexpected...in fact, if anything it might have been a little predictable, but not necessarily in a bad way. Well, Manju is my favorite character as you can probably tell xD The story overall is pretty interesting; if I could give you any advice, it would really be regarding the artwork. Sometimes some drawings appear a little smudged (could just be the way you did the shading), so I would clean that up a little & also work on making neater lines when it comes to objects that are perfectly straight or round, since they're sometimes a little more wavy than they should be. But it really is great overall! I will definitely read the sequel once you start working on that, but since there wasn't much of a cliffhanger, I can be patient I think I have some pretty neat plot twists and turns in mind. I thought that maybe the first part has Satopan as the kinda center, the second Suama and the third Manju. I have created a ton of backround to this project, like family trees and origins for pretty much everything. Well, since I actually do the shading by smudging with the brush, I see where you are coming from. I do it that way because I think it is more lively, but I might put some gray marker into play later on. About the lines, yeah. I maybe should use something other than the brush for them. I thought that if I ended on a crazy cliffhanger like in the Dark Tower where the book ends with the main characters ride on an insane train that wants to kill itself by crashing to a wall, that might have made the whole thing feel... off. xD This is supposed to be sweet and nice. For a chance for me, I might add. I usually do gory stuff. |
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Loving the drama between the girls and the side story with the boy who temporarily becomes an armor witch. Looks like things are heating up~
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